Draft of Script

The Girl Next Door

Written by Rahil Qureshi, Tatiana Serna and Ali Hussein

October 15th, 2010

EXT. Tatiana’s house – Wall Grave Road – Evening

M.S of brothers having a conversation on the bed, lying down

Ali

That club was live, just lacking a bit of girls!!!

 Rahil

I didn’t like it

Ali

What do you mean you didn’t like it? What wasn’t there to like

Rahil

All the girls, you know how I am

Ali

What do you mean how you are?

Rahil

Girls ain’t my thing, guys are

Ali

DON’T TALK LIKE THAT YOU KNOW I’M TRYING TO CHANGE YOU, FIX UP

(Slaps Rahil around the head)

Rahil

Ouch Ali, why you so violent?

Ali

yh, that’s because you know I’m trying to change you, don’t talk like that in front of me

Rahil

Good Ali whatever

Ali

I want you to like Girls not guys

Rahil

Well, you know how I am

Ali

That’s why I took you to a straight club

Rahil

And I didn’t like it, Let me take you to a real club, I’ve seen your world so let me show you mine

Ali

Fine

EXT. High Street Kensington -- club

M.S of Ali talking to rahil in the center of the club, Rahil's facial expressions show that he is excited about were he is.

 Ali

What is this?

Rahil

This is what I call a real girl club

Ali

You’re a disgrace

Rahil

Watch and learn

(Goes of and starts dancing with boys)

L.S of Ali turning baker around, Both of there facial expressions showing how much shock there in seeing each other.

 Ali

Oh my day’s, what you doing here?

Baker

Oh my day’s Ali, what’s going on?

Ali

Nothing man, just with my brother

Baker

What he’s gay

Ali

Yh man, what you doing here?

Baker

Ah, nothing man just checking it out init.

Ali

Oh, I’m getting irritated in here come we go

Baker

Yh man, Hurry up this place is shit!!!

(Ali turns to Rahil)

Ali

Rahil let’s go

Rahil

But I’m having fun

Ali

NOW

Rahil

Ahhh, one minute

(Hugs boy he was dancing with, and then they leave)

EXT. Wall Grave Road -- Ali, Baker and Rahil walking on the street.

L.S of Ali, Rahil, and Baker walking down Wall Grave Road, a cold winter's night. As boys walk down the road the camera zooms out. 

 Ali

That place was shit

Baker

Yh man

Rahil

What you guys talking about it was the best

Ali

Baker where you going are house is her

Baker

What is your mum in?

Ali

Nah man we got a free yard, mum and dad gone away for the weekend

Baker

Oh

C.U of Rahil passing the keys to Ali

M.O.A of the door closing. 

M.S of boys walking up the stairs and into Ali's room

Ali

Rahil take you slippers upstairs to your room

C.U of Rahil picking up his slippers

M.S of Rahil walking upstairs

L.S of Ali turing to Baker and taking his jacket off

Ali

Baker make yourself comfortable

Baker

Is that a shisha pipe let me start it up

Ali

Yh, do your thing

M.S of Baker starting up the Shisha Pipe

L.S of Ali turing to Baker

Ali

Listen I’m gonna start my work out

Baker

Yh do your thing

C.U of Ali taking off his top 

L.S of Ali starting his work out

C.U of Baker showing his facial expressions

L.S of Baker walking towards Ali and purposely falling over

L.S of Ali getting angry

Ali

What the hell you doing?

Baker

Ah, nothing man, just dropped my jacket

Ali

bloody hell man, I’m starting to think twice about your sexuality

Baker

Ah shit, look at that chick

M.S of Ali rushing over to the window)

M.S of Ali showing off his body to Baker

Ali

Ohhh, she sexy

L.S of Tatiana walking towards the house

M.S of Ali panicing and getting stressed out

Ali

Shit she’s coming here

Baker

Relax man, she ain’t all that

Ali

How do I look?

(Poses and tenses body)

Baker

Why you asking me thought you thought I was gay and that

C.U of Tatiana ringing door bell

M.S of Ali

Ali

Watch me move to her

Baker

Let me come with you

Ali

Nah man stay her

L.S of Ali walking out of the room, slowly baker follows

M.S of Ali opening the door

O.T.S of Tatiana 

Ali

Hi

O.T.S of Ali

Tatiana

Hi, I’m Tatiana I just wanted to welcome you to the neighbourhood

O.T.S of Tatiana

Ali

Thanks, how you been?

O.T.S of Ali

Tatiana

Fine thanks

O.T.S of Tatiana

Ali

You know I used to have a dog that I really loved your hair reminds me of him

O.T.S of Tatiana

Tatiana

Oh, well I’m gona be off now take care

O.T.S of Tatiana

Ali

Oh, do you wanna come in?

O.T.S of Ali

Tatiana

No thanks

O.T.S of Tatiana

Ali

O.k. then take care, bye

C.U of Ali and Tatiana Shaking each others hands

O.T.S of Ali

Tatiana

Bye

M.S of Ali turning around, as he turns we see Baker standing there

M.S of Ali about to get angry as we see his body language and facial expressions change

 Ali

What the hell you doin her?

Baker

I’m just looking for my jacket

Ali

You and your jacket, let’s go upstairs

L.S of Boy’s walking upstairs into the room

M.S of Baker smoking Shisha, while Ali is laying down on the bed with his shirt unbuttoned

 Baker

So what she say?

Ali

She was on me, she wanted to come in but I said no because you’re her, see friends come first

M.S of Rahil opening door and walking in

C.U of Baker's face showing his facial expressions

Hand held camera on Rahil as Baker eyes him up and down

 Rahil

HEYYYYYY boys, That girl was cute

Ali

I know she likes me

Rahil

Huh, you please

Ali

She does

Rahil

Whatever, guys put some music on your so boring

M.S of Ali turning on music, Shaggy it wasn’t me starts playing

C.U of Ali and Baker turing to each other and saying

It wasn’t me

M.S of All the boys dancing

(Lights turn of, and music stops playing)

Rahil and Baker

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh

(Lights turn back on)

L.S of Rahil in Baker's arms, and Ali looking in disppear

Rahil

What the hell just happend

Ali

I dunno just stay up her and let me check it out

C.U of Rahil, shaking and panicing

Rahil

Ali please don't go, I’m so scared, just be careful

M.S of Ali

Ali

Don’t worry

M.S of Ali going downstairs

C.U of Rahil and Baker hugging

M.S of Ali rushing up the stairs, holding a piece of paper)

M.S of Baker

Baker

Get off your brothers coming

M.S of Ali

Ali

Look what I found

M.S of Rahil

Rahil

Oh my day’s

B.E.V of Boy’s reading the piece of paper

Altogether

YOU HURT ME, SO BE CAREFUL

M.S of Rahil

Rahil

Oh My god

M.S of Ali

Ali

Just calm down, lets just get out of her

M.S of Rahil

Rahil

Yh lets go

L.S of Boys leaving the room, while they walk out of the room Ali chucks the paper onto the floor

C.U of Ali switchiing the light off

C.U in night vision of the paper, out of nowere a hand appears and picks up the paper

Cut to black.

The End